hi im tori I like tennis. and I like art i also have two brothers. my favourite food is pizza I have a black cat and her name is rachel my favourite colour is blue. I like to do art and i like roller bladding and bike rideing with my mum. i like camping with my famliy
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, February 23, 2021
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ReplyDeletehey tori it's Me Bella maybe next time put in a question so you can get more comments from Bella xx
ReplyDeleteHi Tori its your brother here I really liked your first blog post in korimako it told me lots of things you do and you like to do maybe next time you could check that your giving stuff fullstops and captule letters.
ReplyDeleteAnyhow loved the blog post and keep it up :)