Hi every body This is my slide about how to send a good email πππ
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
How to send a good email
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hello Tori my name is Honey from Toroa! I love the rainbow background it really makes the post look incredible. I have wrote a good email before but yours is way more amazing! I noticed the title of the email was that you don't think animals should be allowed in public transport. Maybe next time you can write a bit more on why you think they shouldn't be allowed. Amazing Email Tori and have a good holiday!
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ReplyDeleteHi honey my name is tori thankyou so much for commenting on my blog it made my day. I appreciate you giving me some fedback and i will try and write a bit more next time and have a great day!
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